Pingu's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Meteor Shower]

Fun short.You did ask for constructive feedback, so I wanted to add my two cents. I think any of the issues I have with this could be attributed to the speed of creation. I understand the tight deadlines you're on for the summer Animation Jams, so I can't really fault you for much.

There's an interesting mix between the plain and detailed backgrounds. You have the grass as both plain night-green and detailed to show every blade of grass (when she looks in the hole). I might suggest that if you're going back and forth between "plain" and detailed, you add the extra details to other elements in the appropriate part. For example, a few extra details on her face or hair when she's looking into the hole. I think that would add a bit to the consistency.

Other than that, no real issues. I enjoyed the dialogue and voice acting.

Good work, I look forward to future submissions!

Temariix responds:

That's a great point. As I was going I decided to start making the more detailed backgrounds but ran out of time to upgrade the ones I had. Thank you very much for the review!

[Going fo a walk]

This was trippy. This has some really odd details in it, but I can't explain why I like it so much. I think the music went really well with the side scroll animation. Great work, congrats on daily 2nd!

[005 1 hour challenge]

Not bad, I remember this style of animation was super popular a few years back. It would definitely be a bit nicer with some music that you could time the movement to.

[Devil's Fudge]

Good work telling a full story in such a short amount of time. I liked the animation style, as well as the voice acting. Both were well done and the audio was very clear.

[Don't leave your Pokemon alone]

Great work! Really funny premise, with some good follow up in the credits. Wartortle's water gun was super effective. Good job on the clean animation and sounds.

[StickmanVsArtist]

Nice take on the “Animation vs. X” genre. Great job showing clean interaction between the Artist and Creation. I wouldn’t mind seeing something outside the greyscale for the colour palette, but I think it worked out in this case. Good work!

SimBol responds:

Thanks . I did black an white cause i recorded it with my phone hence quality wasn't and other my skin colour is a bit dark . Well Thanks for the response , it really motivates me ;)

[100 followers]

This is so strange yet I can’t look away. Good voicework and animation. Congrats on sipping the Famous Juice!

CapaciousSpace responds:

*slurp*

[Animatic_Teamwork gamers]

It's pretty bare bones, but I like the concept as well as the effort put in to wire frame the two players. It's really interesting to see this part of the process. Keep it up, I think this will end up being a great finished work!

JoeSketchConcepts-NG responds:

Sooner or later, I will return to this project and get it finished. Just need to animate the characters themselves over the wire bodies. I even created a separate layer showing foot steps. Just to know where the characters are going to be next.

[Overwatch In a Nutshell]

We all know the team Mei will usually use her ice wall to block her squishy teammates in a room with a red bastion. Good work on the animation, you did a great job of summing up the game.

[Hands]

Interesting application of simple animation. I like how it cycles through the different colours to keep it interesting.

loberoso responds:

Thanks. I'm glad you didn't get bored.